Hook rewriter: ten openers for one post

Here is a draft post for {{platform}}:

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Write ten alternative opening lines for it. Use a different approach for each: a specific number, a question, a mistake, a contrast, a short story opening, a bold claim the post supports, a "most people" framing, a result first, a direct address to the reader, and a plain statement.

Rules:
- Each opener must be true to what the post actually says. Do not promise something the post does not deliver.
- Keep each under 15 words.
- After the list, pick the two you would test first and explain why in one sentence each.
- Then show the full post rewritten with your first pick, changing as little else as possible.

TEN OPENERS 1. Specific number: Three 15-minute checks can save you from paying for a print job twice. 2. Question: Is your print file actually ready to send to the printer? 3. Mistake: A $140 print order she had to redo, and the mistake behind it. 4. Contrast: Her screen looked perfect. The printed flyers came out muddy and trimmed. 5. Short story opening: Last month a customer brought me 500 flyers with the text trimmed off. 6. Bold claim the post supports: The file you approve on screen is not the file the printer prints. 7. "Most people" framing: Most people trust their screen when they send a file to print. 8. Result first: Three checks, 15 minutes, hundreds saved in customer reprints this year. 9. Direct address: Planning a print job? Check these three things before you send the file. 10. Plain statement: Check three things in your file before you send it to print. TWO TO TEST FIRST - #1: it leads with the payoff and a small time cost, which suits a LinkedIn feed where readers decide in the first line whether the post is useful to them. - #5: it opens on a concrete story, which tends to pull readers into the line break before the "see more" cut-off. FULL POST WITH OPENER #1 Three 15-minute checks can save you from paying for a print job twice. Last month a customer came in with 500 flyers she'd had printed online for her grand opening. The colors came out muddy and the text sat so close to the edge that half of it got trimmed off. She'd paid $140 and had to reorder with us. Here's what I tell everyone now. Before you send any file to print, check three things. First, set your file to CMYK, not RGB. Screens show colors that printers can't make. Second, keep all text at least an eighth of an inch inside the trim line. Third, ask for a physical proof, even if it costs $10 more. These three checks take about 15 minutes and have saved our customers hundreds of dollars in reprints this year. If you're planning a print job, send me your file and I'll look it over for free.